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How to write an email to join a club in English: a short A2 Key email with three points

Zara, Kai, Theo and Ms Rivera in the media club room turn to see Amara, a new student with a basketball bag, at the door. An orange cat sleeps on old newspapers in the corner.

The short email in A2 Key and A2 Key for Schools writing: covering three points, greetings and endings, length, a model email and typical mistakes.

A short email to join a club needs three things: a greeting (“Hi Sam,”), at least one sentence for each of the three points in the task, and an ending with your name (“See you soon, Deniz”). In the A2 Key and A2 Key for Schools writing paper, this kind of email or note must be 25 words or more; 30–40 words is plenty. This guide is for students at A2 (elementary) level, aged about 11–15.

Who this is for

  • Students aged about 11–15 preparing for A2 Key or A2 Key for Schools.
  • Students who can introduce themselves in short sentences but are not sure how to build a whole email.
  • For parents: you don’t need strong English to look over your child’s email; go through the checklist at the end together.
  • Too early: if introducing yourself in English (name, age, what you like) is still hard, practise those sentences out loud first.
  • Too easy: if you can comfortably write an email of about 100 words, move on to B1 Preliminary writing tasks.

Open the sample pages

Open the sample pages

Word cards

clubclub

a group of people who meet to do something they like

Amara is looking for the basketball club.

media clubmedia club

a school club that makes videos, photos and stories

The media club room is full of old cameras.

membermember

a person in a club or a team

The club has got only three members.

newnew

not here before; just started or arrived

Amara is new at Harbour Park School.

editoreditor

the person who chooses and checks the stories, photos and videos

Zara is the club's editor.

Conversation

Zara Hi, Amara. Welcome to the club! What's your surname?

Amara Mensah. M, E, N, S, A, H.

Zara How old are you?

Amara I'm twelve. Sorry, what does "editor" mean?

Zara The editor chooses the stories and checks them. Have you got any brothers or sisters?

Amara I've got two brothers, Kofi and Yaw.

Zara What languages do you speak?

Amara English and Twi.

Zara Everyone, this is Amara Mensah. She's twelve, she's from Ghana and she's got two brothers!

Language pattern

You want to join The Loop. Write an email to Zara. Tell her: who you are, what you like, why you want to join. Write 25 words or more.

Hi Zara, I'm Amara Mensah and I'm twelve. I'm new at Harbour Park and I'm from Accra, in Ghana. I love basketball and I like writing stories. I want to join The Loop because I want to meet new people and make friends. Can I come to the club on Friday? See you soon, Amara

Answer all three questions. The model has 55 words; you need 25 or more.

  • Hi Zara,
  • I'm … and I'm …
  • I like / I love …
  • I want to join because …
  • Can I …?
  • See you soon,

More practice

Amara's email to Zara

Hi Zara,

I'm Amara Mensah and I'm twelve. I'm new at Harbour Park and I'm from Accra, in Ghana. I love basketball and I like writing stories. I want to join The Loop because I want to meet new people and make friends. Can I come to the club on Friday?

See you soon,

Amara

be, have got and 's

I'm / you're / he's / she's / it's / we're / they're

be: use it for names, ages, countries and jobs

We're a great team!

I'm not / isn't / aren't

be, negative

No, it isn't. This is the media club.

Are you…? Is she…?

be, questions: am, is or are comes first. Short answers: Yes, I am. / No, she isn't.

Are you new here? Yes, I am.

I've got / she's got

have got: for things you have, family and looks

Amara's got two brothers.

haven't got / Have you got…?

have got, negative and questions. Short answers: Yes, I have. / No, he hasn't.

Have you got five minutes? Yes, I have.

Zara's camera

's after a name = it is that person's. Careful: she's = she is OR she has.

Whose camera is this? It's Zara's.

my, your, his, her, its, our, their

put these before a noun to say whose it is

Kai lives with his grandmother. Their flat is small.

What? Where? How old? Who? Whose?

question words for a thing, a place, an age, a person and the owner

Whose bag is this? Who is that? How old is Theo?

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How this email appears in the exam

In the A2 Key Reading and Writing paper, you get a short situation or a message from a friend, with three points under it. You write an email or note of 25 words or more that covers all three. The task is the same in A2 Key for Schools.

The task below is our own example in the same style; we answer it together in this guide.

  • “Your school has a new photo club. Write an email to Sam, the club leader.”
  • “Say who you are.”
  • “Say why you want to join.”
  • “Ask Sam a question about the club.”
  • “Write 25 words or more.”

Plan one sentence for each point

Before you write, note the three points in the margin with a word or two next to each. This one-minute plan stops you forgetting one. The marking checks whether all three points reach the reader clearly; if one is missing, you cannot get a high mark, however good your grammar is.

Useful patterns:

  • Say who you are: “My name is …”, “I’m thirteen.”, “I’m in class 8B.”
  • Say why you want to join: “I want to join the … club because …”, “I love …”, “I’m good at …”
  • Ask a question: “When does the club meet?”, “Where do you meet?”, “Do I need to bring anything?”, “How much does it cost?”

A model email, line by line

Each line is shown with the job it does. With the greeting and ending it is about 40 words: above the minimum, but no longer than it needs to be.

  • “Hi Sam,” → greeting: the name and a comma.
  • “My name is Deniz and I’m thirteen. I’m in class 8B.” → point 1: who you are.
  • “I want to join the photo club because I love taking pictures of animals.” → point 2: “because” and a real reason.
  • “When does the club meet? Can I use my phone?” → point 3: a question about the club; one is enough.
  • “See you soon, Deniz” → ending and your name.

Greetings and endings: check who you are writing to

To a friend or someone your age, write “Hi” or “Hello” and their name: “Hi Sam,”. To a teacher, use “Dear” and their surname: “Dear Ms Lee,”. End with “See you soon,” to a friend or “Best wishes,” to a teacher, then always add your name.

“How are you?” is natural but covers none of the three points; add it if you like, but not instead of a point.

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Typical mistakes and how to fix them

Some come from translating word for word. Look for them when you finish (mistake before the arrow, fix after it):

  • “I have 13 years.” → “I’m thirteen.” or “I’m thirteen years old.”
  • “I want join the club.” → “I want to join the club.”
  • “When the club meets?” → “When does the club meet?”
  • A vague reason like “because it is good” → “because I love taking pictures of animals.”
  • Copying the task: “I want to say who I am.” does not cover the point; say who you are.
  • Forgetting the ending or your name.

The same details when you speak

When you join a club in person, you hear similar questions. In this short conversation, the new member is asked their age and languages (Twi is spoken in Ghana).

They also ask about a word they don’t know: keep the pattern “Sorry, what does … mean?”

Club member How old are you?

New member I'm twelve. Sorry, what does "editor" mean?

Club member What languages do you speak?

New member English and Twi.

Now write your own

Write this task in 10 minutes, then go through the checklist.

  • “There is a new English club at your school. Write an email to your teacher, Ms Lee. Say what you like doing in English, say which day is good for you and ask what you need to bring. Write 25 words or more.”
  • Check 1: Is there at least one sentence for each point?
  • Check 2: Is there a greeting, an ending and your name? Did you start with “Dear Ms Lee,”?
  • Check 3: Are there 25 words or more? Does your question use “do” or “does”?

Frequently asked questions

How many words should the A2 Key email be?

The task asks for 25 words or more and gives no upper limit. 30–40 words is enough; writing more does not earn marks on its own and adds chances to make mistakes.

What happens if I miss one of the three points in A2 Key writing?

Your mark goes down: an email with a missing point cannot get the top mark, even with perfect grammar. Note the points before you write and tick them off at the end.

How do you start and end an informal email in English?

To a friend, start with “Hi Sam,” and end with “See you soon,” and your name. To a teacher, start with “Dear Ms Lee,” and end with “Best wishes,”.

How do you say your age in English?

Say “I’m thirteen.” or “I’m thirteen years old.” Age goes with the verb “be” in English, so “I have 13 years.” is wrong.

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