A four-paragraph plan for a balanced post
Each paragraph has one job. Write the introduction, about 50 words, first.
- Introduction: a fair statement, then the question. “Outdoor challenge courses can build confidence, but should employers pay staff to take part in them?”
- For: two benefits, opened with On the one hand.
- Against: two costs, opened with On the other hand.
- Conclusion: In my view or On balance, then your conditions.
Develop each reason: claim, explanation, consequence
A label is not an argument. A developed reason says what happens, how, and why it matters. Can and may keep benefits as possibilities.
- Label: “Adventure courses are good for teamwork.”
- Developed: “A carefully designed course can reveal communication habits that an office meeting hides.” “Participants practise asking for help, taking notice of changing conditions, and stopping when a limit is reached.”
- Hedged: “A shared unfamiliar task may also strengthen trust.”
- A cost with its consequence: “If participation affects promotion, the activity stops being genuinely voluntary.”
Conditionals for rules, risks and precautions
Arguments about risk depend on conditions:
- Zero conditional for a rule, first for one likely case: “If people skip checks, errors increase; if we skip tonight’s check, tomorrow’s launch may fail.”
- For a future condition, a present form after if, not will: “If the wind increases, the event will move indoors.”
- Present simple after when, as soon as and until: “As soon as the inspection finishes, we’ll reopen the path.”
- Unless means if not: “The climb will continue unless the visibility gets worse.”
- In case introduces a precaution: “Carry a radio in case the mobile signal fails.”
Probability is not the whole risk
Two organisers of a climbing weekend decide when to change a route. Listen for as soon as, in case and unless.
Key idea for your essay: how likely a problem is and how serious it would be are separate questions.
Maya If the chance of rain is only twenty percent, do we still change the route?
Owen We do if the consequence is difficult evacuation. Probability is not the whole risk.
Maya As soon as wind reaches the threshold, the exposed route closes.
Owen And teams carry radios in case the signal fails.
Maya Unless visibility improves, the final group will take the lower path.
Owen That is slower, but it keeps the decision reversible.
A conclusion that states its conditions
A strong conclusion weighs both sides and names your conditions. Only when, only if, provided that and as long as introduce them: “In my view, employers may offer challenge courses only when an equally valued non-physical alternative exists and no career decision depends on attendance.”
Before you write, discuss:
- “Should employers pay staff to take part in adventure courses?”
- “Can a risk be unlikely and still too serious to accept?”
- “Has society become too afraid of risk?”
Expressions with take
Use three in your post, each in its exact sense.
- Take part in means participate; take place means happen: “Thirty residents took part in the flood drill.” “The safety review will take place on Friday.”
- Take into account means consider: “The forecast must take wind speed into account.”
- Take advantage of means use an opportunity well: “The council took advantage of a dry week to repair the barrier.”
- Take after means resemble an older relative: “Maya takes after her aunt: both assess risk calmly.”
- Take on means accept a cost or responsibility: “The company also takes on cost and legal risk.”
Common mistakes
Check your draft:
- “On the contrary, the courses are expensive.” On the contrary rejects what was just said; for the other side, write On the other hand.
- “If the weather will change, …” Write “If the weather changes, …”
- “unless visibility doesn’t improve” Write “unless visibility improves”
- “The course will take part on Friday.” Events take place; people take part.
- A conclusion that adds a new argument instead of weighing the old ones.
A 10-minute daily routine
Pick one workplace question a week and write the full post at the weekend.
- 3 minutes: one developed reason for each side.
- 3 minutes: one sentence each with if, in case and unless.
- 2 minutes: three take expressions aloud in your own sentences.
- 2 minutes: a one-sentence conclusion with only if.
What comes next
Next at B2: expand a 50-word draft into a story, propose a trial without overstating success, and recommend a rule that changes with the task. At C1+, explain causes and answer a counterargument.
