Compare like with like: three criteria, one measure
A comparison helps someone decide only when both options are measured the same way. Take two options a real person is choosing between, pick three criteria that matter to them, and give a figure for both options under each one.
- Same measure: “Room A costs £240; Room B costs £315.”
- Minimum need: “They need at least 36 chairs and two accessible toilets.”
- Trade-off: “The larger room is more expensive but gives the group enough space.”
Comparatives, as … as and whereas
Short adjectives and those ending in -y add -er (cheaper, easier, bigger); longer ones take more (more expensive). Good and bad become better and worse. To show the size of a difference, put much or a little before the comparative, never very. Use as … as for equal points and not as … as for a weaker one. Both introduces what the options share; whereas sets two figures side by side. In speech, than and as are weak: /ðən/, /əz/.
- “The second room is much bigger and only a little more expensive.”
- “The van is as reliable as the bike, but it does not arrive as quickly.”
- “Park Gym costs £35 a month, whereas City Fitness costs £49.”
Limits: too many, too much, not enough
Limits often decide the choice, so include one. Too many goes with plural nouns, too much with uncountable nouns. Enough comes before a noun but after an adjective. A few and a little mean a small but useful amount; few and little mean almost none.
- “There are too many energy drinks and too much sugar.”
- “The smaller office has enough desks for everyone.”
- “It is not large enough for our 14-person team.”
- “We have a few spare bottles, but few walkers brought hats.”
A short conversation: is the larger room worth it?
Two colleagues are choosing a room for a workshop. Listen for “Seventy-five pounds more”, “much bigger” and the minimum, “at least 36”. Later they find that Market Room charges £48 for a projector that Harbour Room includes, so the real difference is only £27.
Maya We have thirty-six confirmed participants for Saturday. Market Room costs £240 and Harbour Room costs £315.
Owen Seventy-five pounds more is a lot. Is Harbour Room much bigger?
Maya Yes. Market Room has 32 chairs; Harbour Room has 45. We need at least 36, and four people may still book.
A model comparison: 130–160 words
Use four moves: introduce both options, compare three criteria with figures, explain one limit, and recommend for a named reader.
“I tried two gyms near our office for two weeks. Park Gym costs £35 a month, whereas City Fitness costs £49. Both open at 6 a.m. and have showers. City Fitness is closer: it is a three-minute walk, compared with ten minutes for Park Gym. It also has twice as many classes. However, it is too crowded after work. At six o’clock there are not enough free machines, and the changing room is not big enough. Park Gym is quieter and has enough space for everyone. Its trainers are as friendly as the ones at City Fitness, but the walk is longer. For colleagues who train at lunchtime, City Fitness is more convenient. For those who train after work, Park Gym is the better choice because it is cheaper, quieter and less crowded.”
Before you finish, ask who would choose the other option, and why.
Common mistakes
Each has an easy fix:
- “more cheaper”, “more bigger”. Use one form: “cheaper”, “bigger”, “more expensive”.
- “very bigger”. Say “much bigger”.
- “as big than”. Equality takes as … as: “as big as”.
- “too much chairs”, “enough big”. Say “too many chairs”, “big enough”.
- Mixing measures: one room’s price against the other’s size. Compare price with price.
A 10-minute daily practice routine
Pick two real options from your week, such as two phones or two routes to work.
- 2 minutes: play the conversation and repeat each line.
- 3 minutes: note three criteria with a figure for each option, plus one limit.
- 3 minutes: write 130–160 words in the four moves.
- 2 minutes: read it aloud. Does every number have a unit?
What comes next
Once you can compare two options today, look ahead: write a forecast that links evidence to action, then a first-day guide that separates rules from choices.
